I finally finished the story I've been working on since I finished the last Icetouched story.
It's my longest yet weighing in at between 31000 and 32000 words at the first draft. Alright I got it up today rather than yesterday . I extended the ending while going over it since I felt it was too abrupt before the epilogue. So I added a large chunk onto it to give the main story and the epilogue some kind of link.
I intend to upload two version of it. First one going up will be the 'uncut' version which will be erm... very mature (No, it's not erotica... I don't do that kind of thing >_> ). The uncut one shouldn't be. It's just a matter of deciding what I feel can be removed with out detracting from the story too much (The uncut one will definitely be the story I want to tell.) Reason I'm doing two versions is that I say some things in it I've been wanting to say for a while and I don't want to exclude people from the chance of see it. It's also my most overtly Christian story to date... ironic really.
Thank you very much to
for fixing the German in it.
Now that I've finally got that out the way. I can finally begin preparations for NaNoWriMo in November. I'm definitely not going to fail!
===================EDIT: So does no one else want to be featured? Come on I have quite a few watchers and it's free
Taken from This is an idea I nicked from Iscribe; basically I will browse the galleries of the first fifteen people who want me to and select my favourite three deviantions from their gallery, giving reasons why they're my favourites It would be much appreciated if anyone who wants me to peruse their gallery would copy this into their own journal but it's not essential.
I can't promise to get this done quickly as this could be a fairly busy week for me. I had an interview with James Irlam Logistics yesterday and they haven't got back to me yet. Plus I've got an interview with Stoke-on-Trent college for an apprenticeship on Thursday and then there's work and computer class and well, you get the idea...
Anyway, since I took this from Iscribe, I'll sort out her stuff first and I'll look forward to going through everyones' artworks. Please say if you want to be featured on here.
So who's up for it? redruM-110
is a writer from Stoke-on-Trent who has the insane ambition to write something for every literature category in existence. Good luck with that
. Horror Fiction/General Fiction
First of his stories I read and still my favourite. Excellent imagery and I like the main character. The Feast Fiction/Horror
An excellent take on a modern fairy tale. Very grim but a good read. Circus Mirrors Poetry/Fixed
The unusual distinction of being a poem I can relate to. mygreymatter
is a photographer from America. She has a huge collection of photos many of which are very good
. Conjurer Photography/Horror&Macabre
I really like this picture for some reason. The lighting is excellent. Good choice of scenery. Contemplation Photography/Emotive Portraits
I'm a sucker for lighting when it comes to pictures and I really love the lighting in this one too. No Children Here Photography/Horror&Macabre
This is beautifully eerie. The choice of taking the picture in monochrome was perfect. Yoshi86
is an artist from Germany who keeps getting threatened by me to upload more stuff to his gallery
. His gallery isn't the biggest but it's really good.Halbelfe Traditional/Drawings/Fantasy
I really like this pic. I think it's just really well done.Yoshi86 sketches_Sidney Traditional/Drawings/Fantasy
This is my favourite of Yoshi's. Sidney looks awesome although that little girl is really really small
.Rest My Love Traditional/Drawings/Fantasy
I really like this pic. Feel really sorry for the girl in it
. Very nice line art too.
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He's my brother and a much better writer than me. He deserves to be seen.
He has a cool webcomic and he has edited my stuff before
Awesome artist and writer who has lots of potential to be amazing. At such a young age her abilities are amazing.
Her gallery is really cool (especially her writing) and comments on almost all of my recent stuff which is much appreciated
His gallery is really good. I wish he'd just add more to it
He actually has the stamina to work from the beginning of my gallery. He deserves credit for that and also for having a pretty good gallery too
A guild I'm part of. I won the prose competition there!
I'm a Master of Prose there, apparently, so if you're signed up there then I'm technically obligated to look over your stories (I don't mind anyway)
Another club I'm part of.
I administrate on this club. Check it out.
They just keep on coming don't they?